on-time post today since I will be off to see The Hobbit after dinner. I was being very productive.
I spend about 2 hours learning some more Japanese (I’m almost through all the hiragana now) and then spend the rest of the day working on Black Sheep 2.
Here are a few pics of the before and after of the first page of it: (If you don’t want the ending of Black Sheep: Letting go of the Past to be spoiled too much, don’t read the page too closely 😉 )
The red circles you see are the places where I either changed punctuation or capitals (since they are harder to just detect when I’m getting the edits into the computer). And quite often I find myself having to add some words here and there (or whole paragraphs), which is why I print everything off double spaced, leaves nice space for all my notes and stuff.
I edited half of the novella like this today, so I should be done with it after another day or so. Which is good, so I can send it off to the editor well on time 🙂
See you another day!